I like yours.. they're pretty good. But you kinda get repetetive at some parts. I could see em more as lyrics.

One for that guy I can't forget
Been alone for quite some time
Feeling empty deep inside
Hard to sleep this late at night
Knowing you're so far from sight
I miss that look,
I miss your smile,
I miss the way you'd get me riled.
You knew what you had over me,
or were you too puzzled to see?
The child in me scares easily
Try that I may, I can't break free.
This wall of insecurity,
Tightens it's hold so I can't breathe.
I'm sorry that I cannot be,
That girl you thought you saw in me.

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