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I sit in my pitch-black room thinking,
“What the hell is wrong with me?”
I have no reason to be so depressed
But then again what reason do I have to be happy?
Friendship?
Trust?
Love?
Whenever I have those three, there will always be,
Betrayal
Dishonesty
And
Hatred
People say they want to help, that they want to make my pain go away.
Why do you think this is?
Is it because they really care about me? Or is it because they pity me?
If you ask me, I’m really not sure anymore.

~DeVon Candace Moore~

I really like your poem. Emotional, touching. You are a great writer! (:
Please read my poems to and comment on my new thread ' some poems to share '. Thank ya <3

Wah, sorry I was on vacation. I'll check out some of your poems and thanks for the comment ^_^.

<3 Devie <3

Your Welcome! How was vacation? (:
And i hope you comment on my post soon (:
- Lana <3

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Lana.

Hatred stirs up strife but love covers all sins.