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Old 06-30-2008, 09:01 AM
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Default Heey. OMG i love writing poetry (:

Lmfao. I love writing poems. I don't ever write about happiness or butterflies or anything. More sad things, I like to express myself through these poems especially writing something that once invovled yourself. I have a couple. Im not a professional or anything, but i want to know what you guys think. Thank yaa (: ( Some are following a melody of a nusery ryhme or something, but lyrics are completly different )
DONT ASSUME THESE BAD THINGS HAPPENED TO MEE.

I saw my father drinking
I saw my father drinking
Drinking at some club
But oh, he had come back
And told me he needs love

Then I refused and walked away
But he grabbed me at my waist
No, it is not the first
Begins with a scene I just hate

His force leads me to a bed
Which left me scared and bare
Mommy never believes me
This life is so unfair

Nobody understands
What I go through everyday
Being raped is not any joke
But to father it’s okay.

Love Is…

The sun that awakes you, early every morning
Even on a cloudy, rainy day

When you are cold and in need of someone to hold onto,
it is a cup of hot chocolate
warming you, comforting you with its sweetness

The dove that comes to you out of nowhere
that can fly away at any moment
But stays when it should

A 1000 piece puzzle, messing with you
Making you constantly decide, if the pieces fit
And if they do not, it will not create a beautiful picture

The glowing diamond; so precious
That it might just last forever

When you are out of nightmares
But its still hard to sleep at night
Because reality is better than any dream

The fuzzy protection, wrapping you with safety
something you cannot let go of
Without it, it leaves you shivering

The burning red flame of a candle;
Melting it away
Until you are left with only uselessness

The Perennial you can’t get rid of
blooming, over and over.
Just when you think its dead
before you know it, it shows up again.

The gentle touches that gives you tingly feelings
forcing a smile to appear
showing your true happiness inside

The sharp needle
sewing your broken heart back together
repairing memories that happened in the past

Looking up at bright skies,
leaving behind the trails of pictured clouds


Oh Dear, Mother
Oh dear, mother
Now say goodbye
When you read this
Please do not cry
I had to runaway
Daddy wouldn’t stop
He’s drinking and sniffing
Couldn’t tell cops

Oh dear, mother
Enough was enough
Daddy’s raping
Life is now tough
Sadness fills my eyes
Dad made them that way
You wouldn’t believe
What he did each day

Oh dear, mother
He’s non-stop high
Don’t bother, mother
Daddy will lie
This letter is yours
Please take care
Oh dear, mother
Find me somewhere


That Night
To start, sneak out to a party late at night
Quickly add countless beers and problems to fight

Only do this when you're so desperate to fit with the cool
Even if it takes, being suspended from high school

Melt away your carefulness, responsibilities and trust
Almost like thinking this is worth risking, is a must.

Put in thoughts about how home is filled with drama
Then blend in a cup of the solution, marijuana

Now, notice how your heart rate will rise
After, pour in dizziness and red, bloodshot eyes

Next, set the temperature on extremely high
Until hopefully, you’ll notice you’re close to goodbye

Sprinkle on a hint of distorting perception
Mixed with a difficult, tempting addiction

Don’t forget the keys to the car
Try not to go too fast, too far

To Finish, hope you had fun
But you’re soon to be part of the past
Go on and increase the speed
Eyes Wide, Next thing.. CRASH.

She Has Cancer ( Dialogue)

I’ll have my surgery
In a couple of hours,
Ok, best of luck
and here are flowers

Are you going to be okay?
Not sure, they said I have to stay
For a while until my cancer my healed
I wish I could change the pain the feel

I always cant wait for you to dial
You make everyday worthwhile
For you, I don’t need the stars above
All we need is our true love

Tears roll down again
My eyes are blurred
I miss what I heard
and her beautiful words

The world is empty without you
And when you’re not there
I’m in tears, and a day
Seems like millions of years

It’s hell without you
By my side
I want you to say
It’ll be alright

But she has cancer,
She has cancer

Don’t rise to heaven
Please don’t go
I love and miss you
Don’t you know?

You will always be
Right here in my heart
So if you leave
I’d only fall apart

I’m here far away, waiting
For your beautiful touch
For your perfect smile
Always truthful enough

Like this, I cant go on
Please don’t die and be gone
Please stay strong, hold on

She Has Cancer
She Has Cancer

It’s hard breathing through each day
Knowing I cant see you at the end
I wish I could just hear your voice
Friendship is too great to pretend

I’d wait for you forever
Stay with me please
But I want to be
With you now endlessly

She Has Cancer
Cancer

The time has come
Our best friend passed away
These thoughts are painful
Was this her only way?

Back to the
Constant cries
Why did she
Have to die?

We are trapped alone
By the quiet, dreadful darkness
Without the lullaby of her heart
Or the laughs of happiness

She Had Cancer
HAD Cancer


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Old 07-06-2008, 03:00 PM
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I like yours.. they're pretty good. But you kinda get repetetive at some parts. I could see em more as lyrics.

One for that guy I can't forget
Been alone for quite some time
Feeling empty deep inside
Hard to sleep this late at night
Knowing you're so far from sight
I miss that look,
I miss your smile,
I miss the way you'd get me riled.
You knew what you had over me,
or were you too puzzled to see?
The child in me scares easily
Try that I may, I can't break free.
This wall of insecurity,
Tightens it's hold so I can't breathe.
I'm sorry that I cannot be,
That girl you thought you saw in me.
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Old 07-07-2008, 01:58 AM
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Default Replyy...

Thanks for the comment, and yes, some are supposed to be lyrics. (:
I really like "For the one guy i cant forget".
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