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Yep. so. Constructive criticism is helpful!
I know I'm not that good. But I try, and sometimes it turns out okay. :] Here are a few more ^^ Only Human People suck. People think about themselves, And never about others. People suck. People are mean. They don’t care about how your day went, Because their day sucked. People are mean. People are stupid. They don’t understand feelings, Love, lust, hatred. People are stupid. People are judgmental. They think you’re a certain way Just by what you look like. People are judgmental. People are scary. They murder, rob, and rape, And they don’t think twice about it. People are scary. People make mistakes. They’ll do something wrong. And either hate themselves for it, Or not even care. People make mistakes. People suck. People are mean. People are stupid. People are judgmental. People are scary. People make mistakes. But most of all, People are… Only human. That Day in September We all remember That day in September When the skies were Clouded with smoke. But with dramas and shows And movies that blow They’re making this seem The whole thing’s a joke. Not funny completely But I’m laughing discreetly For pop culture is making This seem way too huge Ground Zero sits there And too much of us care Those movies are making The U.S. their stooge But are we forgetting (And that, I am betting) That 9/11 went on Five years ago? Well, we’ll always remember That day in September But can we please stop Wallowing in misery and woe? (OKAY.. FOR THE LATTER OF THE TWO. I AM NOT SAYING THAT 9/11 SHOULD NOT BE REMEMBERED OR SHOULD NOT BE CARED ABOUT. I am just saying that people are STILL freaking about it. I mean, I know it was a horrible event, and many many innocent people were killed, but it's been like..Seven or so years. Calm the hell down, people! >_< )
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You're looking at it from a selfish point of view.
If you think of the families that had to deal with losing someone that day, it is still going on for them, and it always will, until they die; Every single day is a reminder of all the people who were killed. |
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So many people in my life have died.. even if it wasn't in a huge event like 9/11, I still miss them. But I don't constantly freak about it. I've come to accept that shit happens >_<
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True that.
I know it's not an immediate thing. Getting over death = not that easy. But in what...seven years? I think they can get past bringing it up all the time. >_< And I'm fine with the families still mourning their losses.They don't post it on Fox News. But I'm pissed at our government for STILL milking 9/11 for all it's worth. They're using the fear of another terrorist attack to get us to do whatever the hell they want. Not cool.
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That's the point of terrorism sweetie.
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I KNOW!
JEEZ >___< the poem is just freaking saying that, as Americans, we should stop fugging wallowing in all the shit that happened seven years ago. I'm not trying to say "Down With the Government!" or "People Need To Stop Remembering 9/11" or even "Don't Fear Another Terrorist Attack" It's just saying stop posting damn memorials on TV and shit. It pisses me off.
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