Why in the hood ppl LIVE TRIFE man just LIVE LIFE
Be an INSPIRATION achieve a EDUCATION and LIVE RIGHT
Education is a factor and huge importance in LIVING
Be thoughtful and caring one day just atleast be GIVING
Don't be STRESSED be BLESSED your still BREATHING AIR
And put your hand out for reach when in NEEDING CARE
As a MAN i UNDERSTAND the PAIN most people MAINTAIN
SERIOUSLY n LYRICALLY how much more can you SUSTAIN?
For INSTANCE through EXISTENCE you reach hard PROBLEMS
Don't stop move on do critical thinking to SOLVE THEM
The PAST is the PAST so wen u think bout it just LAUGH
See for me my life is been cut now i live HALF by HALF
Coordinate your life TRUTHFULLY and most of all HONESTLY
Some say i've reached the top but i go even BEYOND THEE
My talent shows lyrical DEMONSTRATION n relieves FRUSTRATION
Without any HESITATION i open for the doors for RELAXATION
There's NIGHTS where i had FRIGHTS but my world is to BRIGHT
To have the dark ARISE so even wit closed EYES its so BRIGHT

It's kind of hard to judge whether or not you like a 'freestyle', unless it's recorded, atleast for me.
You sound like you would be a good christian rapper though.