Thru DETERMINATION i reach and speak of my DESTINATION
With no HESITATION i open the doors of RELAXATION
For INSTANCE thru EXISTENCE i've been CONSISTENT
With doing and fufilling my long time LIFE GOALS
Either way you word it or put it saidly LIFE FOLDS
Mass POPORTIONS of the population is over GROWING
To many women in society are choosing ABORTIONS
Multiple dealers and drug trafficing and EXTORTION
Are TOYING and DESTROYING our own gorgeous WORLD
And its sad there are way to many beautiful GIRLS
Using their bodies in the most awful negative WAYS
To many of our youth are drug smokers blazing HAZE
I write and type bars everyday on each lined PAGE
The people in our community living off minimum WAGE
I see it simply as if life's a stage i am da PERFORMER
And also if life's a border then i am the FOREIGNER
Why be RACIST? take a trip back and study the BASICS
All of us of different colors are foreign to diz COUNTRY
Why are my brothers and sisters living on the streets HUNGRY?
In life there are ways to feast upon plentiful FOOD
Why are the young so intelligent in yet so RUDE?
The PLAN is to UNDERSTAND the minds of the WEALTHY
Why are the young GREEDY n growing of OBESITY its not HEALTHY
We need to help our kids they're our next GENERATION
I WRITE to ENLIGHT those who see me as an INSPIRATION

Uppin for feedback

Yah, like I said before, you should go into christian rap [although, I have no idear how to evaluate this kind of writing].

Nah not even lol the only reason why i just rapped like that is cause i listened to this Nas song lol but normally i rap like Cassidy and mixtape artists with punchlines and battle people