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Old 07-21-2008, 11:55 AM
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Default My newest poem

I just made this poem last night. its called "You"

You did what anyone else could do.
But why was it you?
Why was it you who took me from Dark to Light?
Why was it you who stayed up late at night?
Was it because I thought you were my knight in shining armor?
My hero?
My savior?
Or was it because I thought you and only you could rid me of this sadness?
Honestly, I don't know and I don't care.
But what's true is,
I'm glad it was you.
You're the one who told me to open my eyes
Face all my fears
Don't push them aside.
You're the one who showed me how to love and care for myself and for everyone else.
You're the only one who knows the true me.
The first one I will call in a time of need
The last one I will think about before I sleep
Who could have known my feelings for you were this deep?
I know any problems we face we'll be able to mend
I want it to be you
until the very end.


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Old 07-21-2008, 05:52 PM
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Wow thats good you should send that in and get it published i was published for a poem
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Old 07-23-2008, 01:27 PM
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Thank you ^_^.

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Old 07-25-2008, 02:45 PM
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I agree with oxfordgirl!

That was awesome Devie, proper professional-looking stuff.

Well done!

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Old 07-25-2008, 02:51 PM
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Yay thankies! Hey can i call you Corky? It reminds me of Corky Romano >< But thankies!

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Old 07-25-2008, 03:14 PM
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You can call me Corky, or Miss Screw, or CS... Whatever you want! xD
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Old 07-25-2008, 04:33 PM
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Haha! Corky, Miss Screw kinda sounds...promiscuous....XP. BUT I'M NOT BEING MEAN TO YOU LUV!

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Old 07-26-2008, 05:54 AM
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Hahaha, I know! I love it XD
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